Very good efforts Arif sakhi and nice peice of poetry I ever seen…
awesome kzn keep it up
A triumph. Beautifully put, Arif. Keep it up
wah wah wah kya baat hai bhai ki
ap jaisay log hi dunya ko badal saktay hai
this is the start…………………………………
outstanding poetry my bro, love you and your words>>>>>>
Navaid VeerCan
I wish there were an English translation.
🙁
Awesome Arif!!!!!!!A very good piece of poetry which has courage, honesty, and a positive attitude towards future. I really love the line “jo mein chup tha tho ye mera hunar tha.”
It was a very pleasant surprise and hope to see more…
Heartbeating peotry Arif! Well done… uncle must be behind the screen…
Just true.
Two fascinating poems, one by Arif in Urdu (posted above) and another by Kabir in English (posted on PT a couple of months ago), shall be seen as a sign that our younger generation has strong analytical skills, coupled with super-fine articulation power.
Great work Arif. Proud of you
Noor
Wonderful piece of Art Arif!
Tundi ay bad-e-mukhalif say na ghabra aay uqab
Yeh to chalti hai tujhy oncha urany k liay
PAHADOON MAY SAMANDAR DAKHNA HAY
UMIDOON KA SAHAR PHIR DAKHNA HAY
AREY LOOGOO SAMAJ MAY AAYA HAY KIYA
KHUDA KAY DAR KA PHIR DAR DAKHNA HAY
FIRAQAT KI GADI SAMNAY HAY
HAMAY IK BAR PHIR APNA GHAR DAKHNA HAY
NASEEBOON SAY MILI THI WOO ZAMIN JOO
KI BAHNA USKA YOOUN DEKHNA HAY
KINARAY USKAY KHADA WOO JOO DARAKHT HAY
USAY PANI KAY MOOJOON PAR SARAKNA DEKHNA HAY
AGAR HIMAT HAY JOO DAKHNAY KI
CHALLAY AWOO KI HUNZA DEKHNA HAY
KI TOO HAR SHAY PAY QADIR HAY KHOODAWAND
DIKHA DAY KOOIE KARSHIMA KI MAY NAY DAKHNA HAY
outstanding dude ,,,,keep it up man….
Very nice piece of poetry, really soul touching……God bless you.
Well Done Arif!!!!
A Handsomely crafted work.. keep it up!
Well Done Brother Arif : Keep it up and let it touch to the sky and bring pace of mind for the people of beautiful and charming land of Gojal.
Keep it up and contribute your effort through a innocent manner.
Firdous Karim
great initiative, Arif keep it up.
Darjat
well done ushem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awesome
Master piece, pure reflection of pain and hope. I really like the expression
” Bsana phr say hey iss ko ke jiss ka ”
” Umeedon say bhra har ik shajar tha”
Very good efforts Arif sakhi and nice peice of poetry I ever seen…
awesome kzn keep it up
A triumph. Beautifully put, Arif. Keep it up
wah wah wah kya baat hai bhai ki
ap jaisay log hi dunya ko badal saktay hai
this is the start…………………………………
outstanding poetry my bro, love you and your words>>>>>>
Navaid VeerCan
I wish there were an English translation.
🙁
Awesome Arif!!!!!!!A very good piece of poetry which has courage, honesty, and a positive attitude towards future. I really love the line “jo mein chup tha tho ye mera hunar tha.”
It was a very pleasant surprise and hope to see more…
Heartbeating peotry Arif! Well done… uncle must be behind the screen…
Just true.
Two fascinating poems, one by Arif in Urdu (posted above) and another by Kabir in English (posted on PT a couple of months ago), shall be seen as a sign that our younger generation has strong analytical skills, coupled with super-fine articulation power.
Great work Arif. Proud of you
Noor
Wonderful piece of Art Arif!
Tundi ay bad-e-mukhalif say na ghabra aay uqab
Yeh to chalti hai tujhy oncha urany k liay
PAHADOON MAY SAMANDAR DAKHNA HAY
UMIDOON KA SAHAR PHIR DAKHNA HAY
AREY LOOGOO SAMAJ MAY AAYA HAY KIYA
KHUDA KAY DAR KA PHIR DAR DAKHNA HAY
FIRAQAT KI GADI SAMNAY HAY
HAMAY IK BAR PHIR APNA GHAR DAKHNA HAY
NASEEBOON SAY MILI THI WOO ZAMIN JOO
KI BAHNA USKA YOOUN DEKHNA HAY
KINARAY USKAY KHADA WOO JOO DARAKHT HAY
USAY PANI KAY MOOJOON PAR SARAKNA DEKHNA HAY
AGAR HIMAT HAY JOO DAKHNAY KI
CHALLAY AWOO KI HUNZA DEKHNA HAY
KI TOO HAR SHAY PAY QADIR HAY KHOODAWAND
DIKHA DAY KOOIE KARSHIMA KI MAY NAY DAKHNA HAY
outstanding dude ,,,,keep it up man….
Very nice piece of poetry, really soul touching……God bless you.
Well Done Arif!!!!
A Handsomely crafted work.. keep it up!
Well Done Brother Arif : Keep it up and let it touch to the sky and bring pace of mind for the people of beautiful and charming land of Gojal.
Keep it up and contribute your effort through a innocent manner.
Firdous Karim
great initiative, Arif keep it up.
Darjat
well done ushem!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Awesome
Master piece, pure reflection of pain and hope. I really like the expression
” Bsana phr say hey iss ko ke jiss ka ”
” Umeedon say bhra har ik shajar tha”
Well done Mr.Arif, keep it up