Sun. Jan 19th, 2020

[poetry] – muhabbat

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21 thoughts on “[poetry] – muhabbat

  1. Dear NOOR

    What a simple but slow defination of love The LOVE what is love how its to one individual that has to see some thing or one to express it through its features ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,more to talk later

    Good or bad
    BUT its NOOR

  2. Noor

    It is the true manifestation of the sheer power of real love; the summit does not seem too far away from your reach; I believe.

    Simply Splendid!

  3. Noor,
    nice piece of work, if you don’f mind here is the transalation of your work in Dari:

    Ba labkhand-e-tu paiwasta ast
    Naaz-e-mun, ada-e-mun, duwa-e-mun

    Mun wajd-o-sama-o-shor
    Chu gul khand-e-bara-e- mun

    Parishan haal mi gardam
    Na bashi shaad, nabashed inn saza-e-mun

    Inn shewa-e-wabastagi
    Inn nawha-e-paiwand
    Inn hama ra MUHABAT mee goyend

    Nauroze Shah
    AKTC Kabul

  4. Dear Noor,
    Wonderful struggle to add in Urdu literature and i believe one day you your outstanding performance will stand with famous poets like Iqbal, ,Mirza Ghalib, Altaf Hussain Hali, Fraz and so many. Congratulations and keep it up

    Thanks regards
    Sharif khan

  5. savz humui zeemen rang, osman tar sujedah chard,
    aghfech bafed chenakjun, sad afreen humuik ( Try to read it in Wakhi- Xikwor)

  6. Toojik prompted me to say it in Xikwor, what Noor has BEAUTIFULLY said in Urdu:

    XUZGIGHH

    zhu raw, zhu duwoisht

    Cey dem ti makon en qiti

    Tu ko cey kaand

    xhey

    wuz ba raqson

    Tu cey no-xush

    wuz ba wayron

    yem rangi- rishta

    yem tarzi nisbat

    Ha-yemresh xan-en kuxht

    XUZHGIGHH

    It seems Noor in prompting azad shayiri in xikwor!!!

    good luck

  7. noor,
    In continuation of the Love tree subject (Muhabbat / Love) written by you, I just want to share my views about it i-e Love,
    Mohabbat is like a sole of a body, which never affected either from sunlight or wild wind or cold atmosphere or even heat. When ever anyone is in Mohabbat then he is in full prime of its emotions, very high spirits and devotion feelings, the person you are in love is like a overlapped object, what happened to it, it happened to you, likewise when he/she are sad then you are cheerless too, and when he/she are happy then you are in a state of gladness”. What we called this relationship of hearts between you and him/her? I think its Mohabbat and nothing but the Mohabbat.

    Arz kiya hai,

    Apne hone ka pata de dena
    Kabhi guzro to sada de dena
    Yaad aajaoon Ibaadat main agar
    Haath uutha ke bas dua de dena

    Rgds

    Basit.

  8. Wonderful piece of poetry by Xiryan Noor and Amin Bhai.

    I hope beautiful thoughts will flow like smooth waves of an ocean. It is very encouraging and refreshing to see that even in these times of extreme depression people can afford to create such wonderful piece of poetry.

    Thanks for sharing your beautiful thoughts, I hope this has touched souls of many others like it has touched mine.

    Thank you very much indeed.

    Sher

  9. Reflection of inner feelings ,that makes the love sense sensible, good collection of feelings Nur!

    and yes i say , Love is an Unconditional Relationship between two souls !!
    MirzaW
    RWP

  10. waw what a nice poet u r noor bhai. Keep it up. Really the nation needs such kind of venerable persons.

    Best of luck.

  11. BROTHER!

    THIS PIECE OF POETRY IS EXTREMELY BEUTIFIED BY THE WORDS AND THOUGHTS AND ITS ARRANGEMENT TO DEFINE “LOVE” IN FEW WORDS..

    KEEP IT UP!

  12. Lupyor, salam!
    U will be surpraised to see that i m commenting u on ur poetry.. lupyor, i understand a little about this poetry but the comments i saw were very encouraging n thats why i am giving this comment to you..

    “Lupyor …U ROCK”

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