[Disaster Literature] The deadly river
by Kamran Ahmed
A tremor that dragged us down
Trapped for months we will be found
A mist of despondency in the sky
The night’s woe, the day time’s cry
Ensnared in disaster without relief
We’re left distressed despite belief
We long for days that passed away
With dreams, smiles and sunlight’s ray
The unfathomable river with carnage aim
Conquers our valley in a dreadful game
It’s waves are brackish with human tears
It’s ebb and flow that essence fears
Sick of prey yet bawls for more
Deadly wrecks on its hostile shore
It razes and razes, the beat goes on
As nature persists it’s work upon
Twixt between our mores and rights
We are perplexed in how to to fight
Lets break the nut shell and raise our voice
Lets snatch our right we have no choice
Our decades of progress is not vain
My heart tells me we will sustain
Again we’d rise from mortal gash
Like phoenix takes it’s birth from ash
True… We will, and thts nyc…
Very impressive, Khiryan,
You seem to ba a very nice poet, I wish to see more from you.
Keep it up.
Sher
well done.a very great and inspiring piece of writing so beautifully written.it is full of hope and it planted a seedling of belief in my heart that the people of gojal will inshallah face the clamity with great courage and bravery.
very nice ,,,that wat we call intellectual tradition …inovation and inspiration to express feelings ….keep it up
MMQizill (Attabadi)
Spectacular sketch of emotions, and feelings of people.
Dear Kamran Ahmed, a highly appreciate your poetry, keep it up, it is wonderful
Fayyaz Ahmed Dewan
Islamabad
Excellent job kami. Keep it up!
it’s impressive…..i like it cause it based on fact a&d this is our voice.. well done GOD Bless keep it..up..
Nice poem … halat nay ap ko shayer bhe bana diya. kami bhai i liked ur poem because there is Hope in it…