Tue. Oct 20th, 2020

Poem – Save Gojal

The cry and the sorrow are too high oh God!

The tears and fears are so intense oh God!

The lives of the people are so shucked oh God!

The charming of the people are ruining oh God!

Beauty and charming are lost in the darkness

Hopes and expectations are still alive in our heart and mind

Still alive but dying day by day

Nature come and justice with us

We are deprived now from our home

Our existence is meaningless and we have been ignored

Beauty and charming are lost in the darkness

Hopes and expectations are still alive in our heart and mind

By : Firdous Jamal

35 thoughts on “Poem – Save Gojal

  1. dear fidous,
    i do appriciat your beautifull song ,read in this morning and i felt that how we people are unfortunate that ,our beatifull valley,wich is most popular for tour and tourism,trade and for many opportunities.but we are in trouble and no body is there to say yes we are here with you people.

    since from 4th, of janaury to date the govt is looking so lazzy to release the water and save the life and property of gojal uper stream and off course downstream too.

    please we need you people to ensure the govt and world through this reliable source about the disaster.

    with pray

    Rehmat Raheem Sherazi
    karachi

  2. nice poem firdus gr8 to read it andthe best thing abt the poem was there was a line in it which says it all and tht is “Hopes and expectations are still alive in our heart and mind.” i think this is the basic thing which leads us to work for betterment .. keep it up

  3. really nice effort. keep it up. in your own words
    “Hopes and expectations are still alive in our heart and mind”

  4. Dear well done ! Mr. Jamal I liked your poem too much and is the blessing that we have such hidden personalitywho can demand much more in an innocent manner. Well done ,.

  5. i like your poem.i apperite this and i think that these things are good to to remember the diaster ,and also for the rememberance of people,that this is not a small accident

  6. Dear Firdous,

    Its really great the way you have expressed the grief and pain of the people through these words and one can visualise the situation through your poetry..

    nisar

  7. Yar it is interesting for me that you became the situationalistic poet writer, well done keep it on going , my prayers are always with you dear, misss you too much ……………..

  8. what peom Mr. Jamal where are now? and what are you doing?
    I liked the poem , well done friend keep it up

  9. well done…

    really great effort Firdous bro… i like it

    ” Our existence is meaningless and we have been ignored

    Beauty and charming are lost in the darkness

    Hopes and expectations are still alive in our heart and mind”

  10. Well done My student of Gobvernance I expect the same from You .
    Keep it up ,God bless you

  11. I thanks all of you on commenting and appericating my way of demonstration. As a member of the global Community it is my morale responsibility to share the sorrows and griefs of my people who are in worst situation now. As a Gojalian son i am always wity all of you and pray that Assist us in coping the worst situation.

    Once again i thanks all of you

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