Pakistan
Poem – Save Gojal
The cry and the sorrow are too high oh God!
The tears and fears are so intense oh God!
The lives of the people are so shucked oh God!
The charming of the people are ruining oh God!
Beauty and charming are lost in the darkness
Hopes and expectations are still alive in our heart and mind
Still alive but dying day by day
Nature come and justice with us
We are deprived now from our home
Our existence is meaningless and we have been ignored
Beauty and charming are lost in the darkness
Hopes and expectations are still alive in our heart and mind
By : Firdous Jamal
Nice poetry
Very Good Jamal Firdous ..
Kis ka Beta Hain yain???
he is from sost son of afyat late
dear fidous,
i do appriciat your beautifull song ,read in this morning and i felt that how we people are unfortunate that ,our beatifull valley,wich is most popular for tour and tourism,trade and for many opportunities.but we are in trouble and no body is there to say yes we are here with you people.
since from 4th, of janaury to date the govt is looking so lazzy to release the water and save the life and property of gojal uper stream and off course downstream too.
please we need you people to ensure the govt and world through this reliable source about the disaster.
with pray
Rehmat Raheem Sherazi
karachi
nice…keep it up.
ya ka ten xunai yema? nai kuinat mushatak?
great effort Mr. Firdous, Keep it Up
nice poem firdus gr8 to read it andthe best thing abt the poem was there was a line in it which says it all and tht is “Hopes and expectations are still alive in our heart and mind.” i think this is the basic thing which leads us to work for betterment .. keep it up
very good my dear..
i do appriciat your beautifull song…
i appreciate your creative efforts for Gojal.
munir rumi
AKUH Karachi
Really good effort, Firdous.
Keep it up, Bravo!
Best,
SAP
oh dear wt a poem
Dear Firdous” i like your poem about the disaster of Atta Abad keep it up
Regards
Khon
really nice effort. keep it up. in your own words
“Hopes and expectations are still alive in our heart and mind”
Dear well done ! Mr. Jamal I liked your poem too much and is the blessing that we have such hidden personalitywho can demand much more in an innocent manner. Well done ,.
Brother well done ! keep it up god bless You !
i like your poem.i apperite this and i think that these things are good to to remember the diaster ,and also for the rememberance of people,that this is not a small accident
Well Done man , God Bless You Jamal Firdous
Yup! well done don of Numl , you proved
Great work Mr. Jamal keep it up , this is the best way for solving problems
great job.
Dear Firdous,
Its really great the way you have expressed the grief and pain of the people through these words and one can visualise the situation through your poetry..
nisar
Dear good effort. nice poem.
keep it up.
Very nice lupyor! Good……….
Mr. Jamal of Hunza we proud of your great effort , well done and god bless you
Yar it is interesting for me that you became the situationalistic poet writer, well done keep it on going , my prayers are always with you dear, misss you too much ……………..
what peom Mr. Jamal where are now? and what are you doing?
I liked the poem , well done friend keep it up
well done uncle’s great son , keep it high
well done…
really great effort Firdous bro… i like it
” Our existence is meaningless and we have been ignored
Beauty and charming are lost in the darkness
Hopes and expectations are still alive in our heart and mind”
very good poem
un beliveable
the poem is very good and i pray that GOD save gojal…..
The leading poem with true sense of excellence , well done jaml of the land , keep it up
Well done My student of Gobvernance I expect the same from You .
Keep it up ,God bless you
I thanks all of you on commenting and appericating my way of demonstration. As a member of the global Community it is my morale responsibility to share the sorrows and griefs of my people who are in worst situation now. As a Gojalian son i am always wity all of you and pray that Assist us in coping the worst situation.
Once again i thanks all of you
nice poetry chacu i like it..